Writing Homework Help

Hi, I need someone to proof read1000 wordsI also need a conclusion addedPostgrad standard

Yes, Could you please proof-read the document and add more ‘masters’ words where words may be too basic. Also please add a conclusion

and also make sure and fix it does not meet the criteria. but it should be pretty close. thank you. attached it the criteria

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attached is the ruberix