Writing Homework Help
Writing Homework Help. Oakland Community College Ethics and Moral Judgments Discussion
Professor overall thoughts on paper:
Do more to make Midgley’s case. Work on concision and cutting down repetition. Make an outline.
Work on your thesis so it captures the idea of your paper. You have something nice forming in the Aristotle section. Go back to the reading and see if you can strengthen that section. I think focusing on the idea of Aristotle’s theory of how rationality gives us the right to self determination (vs animals) is good.
Bring in the idea of autonomy. I think that will help.
Attached you will find a copy of my paper with red writing which represents my professors input that we should edit accordingly as well as a copy of my actual paper. I will also attach any supporting documents in regards to the topic we are writing about. 🙂
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