Writing Homework Help

Hi,

I’m working on my diversity statement for my college app and I need your magic!

It is maximum 500 words, and I already wrote 425 words.

I need you to trim it, edit it, fix it or whatever that makes my statement look good.

Below is the prompt:

“All students can contribute to the creation of a diverse and inclusive environment when diversity is defined broadly. Whether by a personal attribute, characteristic, culture, experience, or behavior please tell us how you believe you will contribute to the diversity of California State University, Fullerton School of Nursing and the nursing profession.”