Humanities Homework Help

I need help to revise my short essay to the prompt: Agree or disagree with the following statement: “Although Ming and Qing
emperors regarded themselves as superior in status to all other rulers, this was not a primary cause of the conflict between the Qing Empire and Western powers in the period between 1838-1842.”

I wrote almost three pages already, which I need your help to proofread and improve some words and structures. And I also need a strong introduction and conclusion paragraph to tie my paregraphes together.