Law Homework Help

Hello,

I have written a policy memo on climate change. My teacher has left notes for me to make changes. I’m attaching the paper and the notes will be with this message along with the paper requirements please take a look at it and make the changes. Please when you do make the changes be sure to highlight them in yellow so I can show it to her. All changes must be highlighted.

Her notes are:

Background — portion on how this effects people is good, the background breakdown of climate change and global warming is not relevant. This section should focus more on how this impacts people and what things people are doing that exacerbate the climate environment.
Policy Options — where are your facts coming from? Citations? Otherwise good options
Recommendation — this is a good recommendation with a good analysis of why it is a good recommendation. Though this already somewhat exists in the US elaborate on how your option is different form what is already in place — can include background on whats in place in the first section.
Consequences — missing — how would companies respond to this? some companies have lobbied for protections of this? Take this into consideration.