Health Medical Homework Help

I have a paper that was graded and shows what needs corrected and what the instructor wants to see. I will post the assignment itsself, the original paper and the corrections she wants and her comments.

Assignment and Requirements:

Economic Concepts Paper

Description

Provide a 3–5 page summary that discusses the following concepts (be sure to include definitions and examples of each):

• The concepts of utility and elasticity
• Shifters that may affect the supply and demand relationship
• How economies of scale affect profit maximization
• Discuss the relationship between supply and demand in today’s competitive healthcare markets as well as the factors that may influence this relationship. Include examples to demonstrate how the concepts above are used to evaluate financial viability in a healthcare organization.

Notes:

• Please use your readings, Discussions, and current experiences in your response.
• Make sure that you save a copy of the Assignment that you submit.

Directions

The finished Assignment should be a 3–5 page descriptive paper, excluding the title page and references. The viewpoint and purpose of this Assignment should be clearly established and sustained.

Before finalizing your work, you should:

• be sure to read the Assignment description carefully (as displayed above)

Your writing assignment should:

• follow the conventions of Standard American English (correct grammar, punctuation, etc.);
• be well ordered, logical, and unified, as well as original and insightful;
• display superior content, organization, style, and mechanics; and
• use APA 6th edition format for organization, style, and crediting sources including:
• properly formatted header
• • 12-point, double-spaced, Times New Roman font
  • use of in-text citation title page and reference page
  • use of headings (if applicable

  Comments from Instructor:

• I wanted to send you the beginning graded paper, it is missing APA, and it is missing cites, it is missing you also. This is a paper you write after reading about it, using cites to support your words with terrific follow up. This has not pupose statement, no flow and no cites in the first paragraph. Please see attached papers.

The papers below are the original and the one with the instructors comments.