Health Medical Homework Help

I need some help with revising the paragraph I have written so far, it needs to be in FIRST PERSON and please fix my grammatical errors and make it make sense and flow better. ALSO add to the paragraph- WHY DO I DESEVE AN ADMISSIONS INTO THE RADIOLOGY PROGRAM? HOW DOES IT INTEREST ME AND WHAT QUALITIES DO I HAVE THAT WILL MAKE ME A GREAT RADIOLOGIC TECH.

I will put the paragraph when I choose my tutor