Economics Homework Help

I finished my essay, and my TA already gave feedback. Can you revise my essay with these feedback?

Option 1: Statement of Purpose

Perhaps the most common personal narrative, a personal statement or statement of purpose provides future graduate schools or employers with a quick glimpse into who you are and how well you will fit into a program or workplace. These statements very often follow the formulaic essay style, as readers of these statements must sort through hundreds in a short amount of time. The keys for these statements are clarity and authority. Your job is to research the school or company/job and depict yourself in a way that shows readers why you are a good investment.

You may use this option as an opportunity to compose a statement for a real graduate school or job opening; or you may respond to the prompt below, which is similar to many prompts for graduate school:

How have you made use of your education for the betterment of the community around you? How will your research/scholarship in our program allow you to further develop your communities?