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Business Finance Homework Help. Edit on my persuasive speech outline
I already have my outline ready in the attachment , but my professor comment on some points needs to be correct it
Her is the comments on the outline that should be modified :
1.Remember that you are persuading your audience to take action on something; your specific purpose does not reflect this.
2.The thesis statement should be a single sentence.
I3.n the Introduction, you provide a quote where the thesis is supposed to be; make sure that state your thesis.
4.You have too much information in your introduction; section IV should be a preview of main points, not quotes from sources.
5.On top of page 2, there is a Roman numeral I, but the information is out of place there and should be removed.
6.Remember that there should only be two main points in the body of the speech; main point one is the problem statement and main point two is the solution. Further, main point one should have two supporting points: a cause and an effect. Main point two, the solution, should be a single sentence. Additionally, there should be no quotations or source citations anywhere in the body; al points should be in your own words, and written as single sentences.
7.Remember that the purpose of a transition is to briefly wrap up the previous point and briefly introduce the next point.
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